NOTE: This is the final edited video, I hope you all find it to your liking because of all of the complications that came with making it.
Austin: The slides are great! Are they related at all?? this book sounds great!
Trevor: Great presentation and i'm looking forward to seeing your finished product! The only things I really noticed was on one of the slides you put "finding up" instead of finding out and that there are very few picture but you said that they would be added later on.
Ms. Powell: The music with it's strong forward beat fits the pictures. Very effective transitions. It would be nice to better understand the connection between Darius and Twig, are they friends, brothers? Why would I be interested in reading this book? The purpose of the trailer is to get me to read the book. I think you can figure out a way to make want to do that. Perhaps filling in the black intervals will help. Good start.
Kevin:Like the presentation and I like you will have a very good finished product... I do think you need to explain the connection between these characters in the story on the slides. Good start!
Alen: Your video looks very good however it would be more helpful if you could explain the connection between the characters and where they live.
NOTE: The black intervals are where footage will be added later.
About Me Peer Review:
Please check (in your color) the score in each column that most closely applies. Then add one comment on something done well and one comment on something that could be improved.
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Grade=C |
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Includes 5 or more photos or slides. |
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Includes 4 photos or slides. |
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Includes 3 photos or slides. |
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Has a Title slide which includes student’s name |
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Title slide with no name. |
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No title slide. |
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Uses multiple effects and transitions to enhance the production. |
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Uses effects or transitions. |
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No effects added and standard transitions only. |
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Uses music or audio narration that suites the mood of the project and adheres to copyright regulations. |
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Does not use music or uses too much (more than 30 sec.) of a copyrighted piece. |
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No music. No audio. |
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Saves the file as a .wmv, display size 640 x 480 pixels , profile for computers – 2. Successfully uploads the movie to the wiki. |
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Saves file as a .wmv but cannot upload to wiki. |
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Saves file as a .mp3 and makes no attempt to upload to wiki. |
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Completes the project by Sept. 9. |
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Completes the project during the first 6 weeks. |
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Completes the project before the end of the semester. |
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Comments (1 positive and 1 improvement):